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Thread: Never Ending Haiku

  1. #46
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    Bathing in neon lights
    Dressed only in birthday suit
    Without slightest shame
    Some people wait for things to happen. Some make things happen. Many just don't know WHAT HAPPENED!!!

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    Without slightest shame
    Armoured in heavy metal
    The chastity belt

  3. #48
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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    D

    Just pretend only
    Lurid imagination
    an uneasy path
    an uneasy path
    which iyam trying my hand
    giving it a go

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    Quote Originally Posted by Naka
    an uneasy path
    which iyam trying my hand
    giving it a go
    Excellent attempt, bro. ~~~ Unfortunately, the last post was ...

    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    Without slightest shame
    Armoured in heavy metal
    The chastity belt
    So your first line should be the last line which is ...

    The chastity belt

  5. #50
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    moving on ...

    The chastity belt
    very unconventional
    An inconvenience

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    An inconvenience
    Stopped at two road blocks just now
    Wasted precious time
    "Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life." --- Confucius

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    Quote Originally Posted by QuietStorm
    An inconvenience
    Stopped at two road blocks just now
    Wasted precious time

    VP, I was a bit blur there...

    Wasted precious time
    checked every vehicle
    causing the BP to soar

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    Quote Originally Posted by Naka
    VP, I was a bit blur there...

    Wasted precious time
    checked every vehicle
    causing the BP to soar
    (And apparently a little blur here too... D. Your last line is seven syllable, determinable when you read it out loud. Remember that the game follows a 5-7-5 syllabic layout. With that in mind, I shall modify your post to ...)

    Wasted precious time
    checked every vehicle
    My blood pressure soared

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    My blood pressure soared
    Palpitation of my heart
    I should rest awhile

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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    (And apparently a little blur here too... D. Your last line is seven syllable, determinable when you read it out loud. Remember that the game follows a 5-7-5 syllabic layout. With that in mind, I shall modify your post to ...)

    Wasted precious time
    checked every vehicle
    My blood pressure soared
    I simply hentam without considering the 5-7-5 syllabic layout.

    My blood pressure soared.

    to the shock of the doctor.

    who prescribed obat


    ---
    boleh?

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    who prescribed obat
    the flying doctor, of course
    The best outback doc

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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    who prescribed obat
    the flying doctor, of course
    The best outback doc
    The best outback doc
    young, rugged with experince
    to serve and to please

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    to serve and to please
    Announced the Prime Minister
    To the rakyat here

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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    to serve and to please
    Announced the Prime Minister
    To the rakyat here
    to the raykat here
    during the state election
    all in sarawak

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    all in sarawak
    are ecstatic with new hopes
    New expectations

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