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  1. 02-04-2011, 07:33 PM #46
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    Some people wait for things to happen. Some make things happen. Many just don't know WHAT HAPPENED!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
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    an uneasy path
    an uneasy path
    which iyam trying my hand
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    Quote Originally Posted by Naka
    an uneasy path
    which iyam trying my hand
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    Excellent attempt, bro. ~~~ Unfortunately, the last post was ...

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    So your first line should be the last line which is ...

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    moving on ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by QuietStorm
    An inconvenience
    Stopped at two road blocks just now
    Wasted precious time

    VP, I was a bit blur there...

    Wasted precious time
    checked every vehicle
    causing the BP to soar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Naka
    VP, I was a bit blur there...

    Wasted precious time
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    causing the BP to soar
    (And apparently a little blur here too... D. Your last line is seven syllable, determinable when you read it out loud. Remember that the game follows a 5-7-5 syllabic layout. With that in mind, I shall modify your post to ...)

    Wasted precious time
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    My blood pressure soared
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    My blood pressure soared
    Palpitation of my heart
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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    (And apparently a little blur here too... D. Your last line is seven syllable, determinable when you read it out loud. Remember that the game follows a 5-7-5 syllabic layout. With that in mind, I shall modify your post to ...)

    Wasted precious time
    checked every vehicle
    My blood pressure soared
    I simply hentam without considering the 5-7-5 syllabic layout.

    My blood pressure soared.

    to the shock of the doctor.

    who prescribed obat


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    who prescribed obat
    the flying doctor, of course
    The best outback doc
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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    who prescribed obat
    the flying doctor, of course
    The best outback doc
    The best outback doc
    young, rugged with experince
    to serve and to please
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    Quote Originally Posted by venuspop
    to serve and to please
    Announced the Prime Minister
    To the rakyat here
    to the raykat here
    during the state election
    all in sarawak
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